Articles | Volume 17, issue 1
https://doi.org/10.5194/esd-17-167-2026
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Extreme events in the Amazon after deforestation
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- Final revised paper (published on 04 Feb 2026)
- Preprint (discussion started on 08 Jul 2025)
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-3221', Anonymous Referee #1, 14 Aug 2025
- AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Arim Yoon, 29 Sep 2025
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-3221', Anonymous Referee #2, 19 Aug 2025
- AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Arim Yoon, 29 Sep 2025
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ED: Reconsider after major revisions (05 Oct 2025) by Somnath Baidya Roy
AR by Arim Yoon on behalf of the Authors (27 Oct 2025)
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ED: Referee Nomination & Report Request started (10 Nov 2025) by Somnath Baidya Roy
RR by Anonymous Referee #2 (17 Nov 2025)
ED: Publish as is (12 Jan 2026) by Somnath Baidya Roy
AR by Arim Yoon on behalf of the Authors (12 Jan 2026)
General comments
The paper compares the extreme events between two simulations, a control and an Amazon deforestation, using the ICON global model at 5-km resolution. The simulations are based on the two three-year runs, using climatological sea surface temperature. It is an interesting article, well-written and well-organized. However, several conclusions should be drawn more carefully. It is not clear that the CTL run is producing a realistic Amazon climate; validation at the local scale with direct model output variables would give a clearer picture. The unchanged total precipitation with deforestation has implications on the precipitation recycling topic, which requires more attention.
Specific comments
Major concerns about the model setup
As models increase horizontal resolution and switch off the convective parameterization, convective mixing is not treated within its timescale, and stronger updrafts are produced at the grid scale. This lifting of the air by the updraughts leads more easily to air saturation. The cloud microphysics produces a lot of rain due to saturation, but it does not treat column mixing. If some convective mixing is allowed, those extreme precipitation events should probably decrease.
2. Local validation of control run. Switching off convective parameterization completely may need additional verification at the local scale. I recommend including maps of precipitation over the Amazon region to validate precipitation, temperature, and winds at the local scale.
3. Forest parameters: Rooting depth is too shallow; Amazon forest roots are much deeper and should sustain evapotranspiration during dry periods.
4. Integration length: Three-year length is short for the runs to reach a stable climatic condition. The 15-day spin-up time to reach climatic conditions is also short.
5. Validations:The work requires validation at local scale of direct output variables. Differences and statistics are not enough to show the realism of the simulations (precipitation, temperature, evapotranspiration, winds, in different seasons) in the CTL run, There is not enough discussion on the precipitation recycling. This is a major topic
6. Concerning Citations that deserve to be mentioned:
Bottino et al. 2024 (https://doi.org/10.1038/s41598-024-55176-5)
Brito et al. 2023 ( https://doi.org/ 10.1002/joc.8158),
Pilotto et al. 2023 – (https://doi.org/10.1007/s00382-023-06872-x)
Rocha et al. 2017 (http://dx.doi.org/10.1590/0102-77863230006)
Salati et al 1979: https://doi.org/10.1029/WR015i005p01250 . Classic paper
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