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https://doi.org/10.5194/esd-17-475-2026
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Response of ice sheets, sea-ice and sea level in climate stabilisation and reversibility simulations using a state-of-the-art Earth System Model
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Review of ‘Response of ice-sheets, sea-ice and sea level in climate stabilisation and reversibility simulations using a state-of-the-art Earth System model’ by R.S. Smith et al., submitted to EarthSystemDynamics.
The paper describes an ensemble of simulations investigating the effect of stabilisation of CO2 levels at different global temperature anomalies using a coupled ESM/ice sheet model for Greenland and Antarctica including a scenario mimicking the effect of removal of the entire anthropogenic CO2. The experimental design follows the TIPMIP protocol and fills in additional levels at which stabilization takes place. The topic is highly actual and fits perfectly into ESD. In general, the paper is well written. The analysis could go more into depth, but the authors see this as a first paper, introducing the set of experiments and leaving the detailed analysis for later paper.
It is sufficient material to be published, but in some places not enough analysis to make me really happy. One example: Following your argument in section 3.6, the Antarctic SMB closely follows the GSAT (306/7) and stabilizes as soon as emission stop (307). This is obviously differently then the behavior of Antarctic SAT, which continues to warm even after stopped emission (Fig.2b and discussion). Here a bit more careful discussion and analysis of the different behaviors after stabilization and the causes behind would be essential. Why is the local Antarctic SAT not relevant?
In general the paper can be published after a bunch of minor corrections.
Some general comments to the figs.:
The yellow line is almost invisible in my printed version, on the screen it looks fine. Changing this into orange could be a compromise.
In the (mostly temp.) anomaly time series (1cd, 2ab, 4a, 7ab) a zero line should be plotted. That makes it considerably easier to assess potential drift.
In some places PI is used as reference, in others ZE-0. This is rather inconsistent. I recommend to plot them both. This would also allow the reader to estimate, whether the drift in the ice sheet has an effect on the southern ocean climate (sea ice, temp) or not.
Detailed comments
37 crucial ?that?
62 specified emission of CO2 be more specific and give the number
96-98 specify the length of the runs
100-104 does not make sense to describe experiments specifically that are not used in the paper. Here a vague hint to more experiments should be sufficient
187 southern hemisphere SAT is inaccurate, you are discussing only the polar SAT. The PI runs shows similar multidecadal variability
192-196 max surface air warming .. is always constrained by the melting temp of the ice surface..
While I can follow this argument for Greenland and higher CO2 levels, where it is at least true in summer, this is almost completely irrelevant for Antarctica. Even in the highest scenarios the melting is restricted to coastal areas. The high elevation areas of the ice sheet are and will be far away from the melting temp and are obviously accumulating happily mass (see fig.7c). Give a better reason!
200 does the physics of sea ice depend really on the cumulated emissions or rather the Arctic SAT, which is linearly related to GSAT and the cumulated emissions? Please give a physically plausible reasoning!
220 How does the sign change of the GrIS mass contribution relate to the time, when the GSAT anomaly becomes negative?
section 3.6 The effect of the residual mass loss on the climate is not shown at all. If it is negligible, great, than please explicitly state this. Showing ZE-0 also in in the climate plots particularly in the south would remove remaining doubts.
339 THe typo
362 here or somewhere else a small discussion would be helpful, that GrSMB does not lead to more ice production for negative GSAT anomalies (Fig. 7d). Please discuss the mechanism(s) behind this.