Articles | Volume 17, issue 5
https://doi.org/10.5194/esd-17-1381-2026
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Regional contrasts of ecosystem productivity sensitivity to atmospheric CO2 growth across East Asia
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- Final revised paper (published on 28 Sep 2026)
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ED: Submit a revised manuscript (02 Jun 2026) by Kira Rehfeld
AR by Sang-Wook Yeh on behalf of the Authors (04 Jun 2026)
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ED: Publish subject to technical corrections (25 Aug 2026) by Kira Rehfeld
AR by Yun-Soo Na on behalf of the Authors (01 Sep 2026)
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The manuscript investigates the spatial and temporal variations of ecosystem productivity sensitivity to the atmospheric CO2 growth rate (ACGR) across East Asia, utilizing the Global Carbon Budget and a subset of TRENDY v13 dynamic global vegetation models. While evaluating the regional divergence of carbon cycle feedback is an important pursuit, the manuscript currently suffers from critical methodological flaws. Specifically, concerns regarding the statistical definition of "sensitivity," unaddressed confounding climatic variables, and structural inconsistencies in the narrative must be thoroughly addressed. Extensive revisions are required to ensure the robustness of the proposed physical mechanisms.
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Lines 54-59. The definition of ACGR needs clarification. The text describes ACGR as the annual change in atmospheric CO2 concentration, but the unit is mass-based unit rather than a concentration-based unit.
Lines 88-94. The exact regression framework is under-specified. Please provide the explicit regression equation used to define "sensitivity", the units of the regression slope, and how significance was assessed for each moving window.
Lines 105-106 and 245-267. PAR is analyzed using "actual PAR values instead of ACGR sensitivity", whereas the other axes in Figs. 4-6 are sensitivity metrics. This mixes variables of different statistical meaning.
Lines 110-112. The sentence over-interprets the sign of the fitted slope. A negative NEP sensitivity does not, by itself, demonstrate a weakening of ecosystem carbon uptake ability.
Lines 112-117. The model-selection criterion needs stronger justification. Retaining models based on sign consistency or significance only in the last 20-year window appears rather ad hoc, especially because the subsequent analyses cover the full 1959-2023 period.
Lines 121-127. The regional partition requires a stronger justification. The text itself acknowledges that the GPP sensitivity pattern does not perfectly align with the East Asian monsoon boundary, yet the main comparison is built on that mask. A sensitivity test with an alternative regional definition would strengthen the analysis.
Lines 140-146. Expressions such as "downward trend in negative NEP sensitivity" and "reduction in negative GPP sensitivity" are sign-ambiguous and hard to interpret. Please rewrite these passages using clearer language, for example by stating explicitly whether the values are becoming more negative or moving towards zero.
Lines 156-158. The opening sentence of Section 3.2 is grammatically incomplete and conceptually abrupt.
Lines 170-174. There are both language and presentation issues here.
Lines 190-191. There is a clear inconsistency between the text and Fig. 4f. The manuscript reports r = 0.66, but Fig. 4f shows a negative relationship and labels it as r = -0.66. Please correct either the text or the figure.
Lines 239-242. The causal language is too strong. A coefficient of determination from a bivariate relationship is not sufficient to conclude that PAR is "the primary factor" weakening GPP sensitivity.
Lines 250-264. Trend slopes for precipitation, cloud cover, and PAR are reported without units.
Lines 270-281. The land-cover discussion has a temporal mismatch. The manuscript uses mean MODIS land cover from 2001-2023 to interpret sensitivity behaviour over 1959-2023. This should be acknowledged more explicitly as a limitation.
Lines 295-306. The conclusion again goes beyond what the presented metric can directly support.