Articles | Volume 16, issue 6
https://doi.org/10.5194/esd-16-2187-2025
© Author(s) 2025. This work is distributed under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.
The preseason warming of the Indian Ocean resulting in soybean failure in US
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- Final revised paper (published on 05 Dec 2025)
- Supplement to the final revised paper
- Preprint (discussion started on 04 Jul 2025)
- Supplement to the preprint
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Comment types: AC – author | RC – referee | CC – community | EC – editor | CEC – chief editor
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-2930', Anonymous Referee #1, 26 Jul 2025
- AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Menghan Li, 05 Sep 2025
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-2930', Anonymous Referee #2, 14 Aug 2025
- AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Menghan Li, 05 Sep 2025
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AR – Author's response | RR – Referee report | ED – Editor decision | EF – Editorial file upload
ED: Reconsider after major revisions (12 Sep 2025) by Karin van der Wiel
AR by Menghan Li on behalf of the Authors (01 Oct 2025)
ED: Referee Nomination & Report Request started (10 Nov 2025) by Karin van der Wiel
RR by Anonymous Referee #1 (10 Nov 2025)
RR by Anonymous Referee #2 (18 Nov 2025)
ED: Publish subject to technical corrections (20 Nov 2025) by Karin van der Wiel
AR by Menghan Li on behalf of the Authors (21 Nov 2025)
Manuscript
This manuscript presents a compelling study of the delayed teleconnection between Indian Ocean SST anomalies and U.S. soybean yield variability. The authors argue that ND(-1)J Indian Ocean Basin (IOB) warming contributes to significant soybean yield losses the following summer by inducing winter circulation anomalies, spring soil moisture deficits, and summer heat and drought stress. The central finding that IOB SST explains 16% of yield variance with a lead time of 9 months is novel and potentially valuable for seasonal agricultural forecasting. The manuscript is well-structured, the analysis is generally sound, and the physical reasoning is plausible. The manuscript is well-structured, the methods are appropriate, and the conclusions are justified. I recommend acceptance after minor revisions to enhance clarity and contextualize limitations.
Specific comments
L59. “food securety” → “food security”.
L66. “Political units” could be ambiguous to international readers. Please specify that this refers to U.S. states.
L97. The Gram-Schmidt procedure is mentioned but not described in detail. Clarify whether Niño3.4 was regressed from IOB or vice versa and consider including a short equation or citing a standard reference.
L126. When selecting ND(-1)J as the optimal window, indicate whether a formal selection criterion (e.g., max correlation, statistical threshold) or multiple testing adjustment was applied.
L201-209. Please update figure references to follow the standard format:
L201. “Fig. 4(b) and 4(c)” → “Figs. 4(b) and 4(c)”
L208. “Fig. 4(b) and 4(e)” → “Figs. 4(b) and 4(e)”
L209. “Fig. 4(c)-(e)” → “Figs. 4(c)- (e)”
L255. The text refers to “Fig. 6(g)”, but the panels go only to (f). This should be corrected.
Units and labeling: Colorbars in Figs. 3-6 should include clear units (e.g., “% per σ” or “°C per σ”). Consistent labeling will improve readability.