Articles | Volume 13, issue 3
https://doi.org/10.5194/esd-13-1077-2022
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Dynamic regimes of the Greenland Ice Sheet emerging from interacting melt–elevation and glacial isostatic adjustment feedbacks
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RC1: 'Comment on esd-2021-100', Kristin Poinar, 23 Feb 2022
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RC2: 'Comment on esd-2021-100', Anonymous Referee #2, 06 Apr 2022
- AC2: 'Reply on RC1, RC2 and EC1&EC2', Maria Zeitz, 04 May 2022
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EC1: 'Comment on esd-2021-100', Michel Crucifix, 21 Apr 2022
- AC2: 'Reply on RC1, RC2 and EC1&EC2', Maria Zeitz, 04 May 2022
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EC2: 'Comment on esd-2021-100', Michel Crucifix, 21 Apr 2022
- AC2: 'Reply on RC1, RC2 and EC1&EC2', Maria Zeitz, 04 May 2022
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ED: Reconsider after major revisions (04 May 2022) by Michel Crucifix
AR by Maria Zeitz on behalf of the Authors (05 May 2022)
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ED: Reconsider after major revisions (13 May 2022) by Michel Crucifix
ED: Referee Nomination & Report Request started (16 May 2022) by Michel Crucifix
RR by Kristin Poinar (08 Jun 2022)
ED: Publish subject to minor revisions (review by editor) (13 Jun 2022) by Michel Crucifix
AR by Maria Zeitz on behalf of the Authors (18 Jun 2022)
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ED: Publish as is (28 Jun 2022) by Michel Crucifix
AR by Maria Zeitz on behalf of the Authors (28 Jun 2022)
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Summary and general comments:
This manuscript presents a discovery of unforced, long-term fluctuations in the size of the Greenland Ice Sheet. The fluctuations (which are not really oscillations, as they are not strictly regular or repeating) have periods ~80 - 300 kyr and originate from the interactions between the melt-elevation feedback (a positive feedback) and glacial isostatic adjustment (a negative feedback). This has not been previously studied on long (ice age) timescales in the absence of external triggers (e.g., Heinrich events initiated by ocean heat pulses) for a land-terminating ice sheet. The finding of these emergent cycles could be relevant for "deep future" states of the Greenland Ice Sheet, although it is a challenge to imagine a future without climate forcings that would presumably overshadow the internal variability. Regardless, it is an interesting discovery that merits reporting, and this paper is largely successful. I have only minor suggestions, and although they are somewhat numerous, they are all quite attainable.
Specific comments:
The authors used a "power spectrum analysis" to identify periods in the ice volume time series. These methods should be explained, if only briefly, and some test for significance should be carried out. The authors state that "The oscillation times do not seem to show a clear dependence on the values for warming, lapse rate or mantle viscosity" (P11 L12). This seems troubling -- wouldn't we expect a clear pattern to emerge within the parameter space? If so, the authors should do additional thinking and put forth possible explanations for the scatter. If not, that is interesting too, and the authors should elaborate on the reasons why this system is not governed regularly.
Relatedly, Figure 2 shows that some of the parameter combinations do, apparently, have quite regular periods (especially in Figure 2b), while others do not (such as the higher lapse rates in Figure 2a). A short presentation of the values of the periods (and which are significant) should be done. The significant period values (kyr) could even simply be written inside the cyan blocks of Figure 4.
As alluded to in my summary, I suggest replacing "oscillation" throughout the manuscript with a similar word that does not imply regularity, such as "fluctuation" or even "variation". This is because the sequence of states does not always have a regular repeat interval.
The first six lines of the Discussion restate the results, as do lines 11-17 on this page. These are redundant to the rest of the manuscript and should be removed. The last three lines of the first paragraph describe one possible extended importance of this study, which is not actually studied or discussed, and therefore would be more appropriate in the Conclusion or Introduction.
Finally, I would suggest a different name than "recovery" for the state where the ice sheet reaches a new equilibrium size significantly smaller than its start. "Recovery" implies, to me, that the ice sheet returns to its initial state. More precise names could be "re-equilibration" or "new steady state".
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