Minimal dynamical systems model of the Northern Hemisphere jet stream via embedding of climate data

Faranda, Davide; Sato, Yuzuru; Messori, Gabriele; Moloney, Nicholas R.; Yiou, Pascal

doi:https://doi.org/10.5194/esd-10-555-2019

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https://doi.org/10.5194/esd-10-555-2019

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https://doi.org/10.5194/esd-10-555-2019

© Author(s) 2019. This work is distributed under
the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.

Articles | Volume 10, issue 3

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19 Sep 2019

Research article |

| 19 Sep 2019

Minimal dynamical systems model of the Northern Hemisphere jet stream via embedding of climate data

Davide Faranda, Yuzuru Sato, Gabriele Messori, Nicholas R. Moloney, and Pascal Yiou

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RC1: 'Review of esd-2018-80', Anonymous Referee #1, 22 Jan 2019
- AC1: 'Answer to reviewer 1', Davide Faranda, 01 Mar 2019
RC2: 'Anonymous Referee #2', Anonymous Referee #2, 22 Jan 2019
- AC2: 'Reply to Reviewer 2 comments', Davide Faranda, 01 Mar 2019

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AR: Author's response | RR: Referee report | ED: Editor decision

ED: Reconsider after major revisions (15 Mar 2019) by Andrey Gritsun

AR by Davide Faranda on behalf of the Authors (03 May 2019) Author's response Manuscript

ED: Referee Nomination & Report Request started (22 May 2019) by Andrey Gritsun

RR by Anonymous Referee #1 (03 Jun 2019)

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"Minimal dynamical systems model of the northern hemisphere jet stream via embedding climate data"

Authors: D Faranda, Y Sato, G Messori, NR Moloney & P Yiou

Review of esd-2018-80 version 2

Recommendation: Accept after very minor corrections.

General Comments:

The article is now very much improved and generally suitable for publication with just a few typos and cosmetic changes to be fixed. It provides analysis techniques which should be of general interest to the ESD readership as well as a very simple data driven model of regime transitions of the atmospheric zonal flow.

Specific Comments:

P6, line 30: 2018  2019

P8, line 23: “There is also some indication of westerly propagation of the clusters”: I found this a bit puzzling at first since blocks generally develop upstream of the blocking region and then lock into place with some subsequent oscillations about the central position. However, the largest signal will probably come from the largest scale planetary waves which will tend to retrogress. So maybe the retrogression is not a signal of blocking so much as of planetary wave retrogression? No action is required here.

P8, lines 29-30: Brackets around the references.

P9, line 4: ??  7

P9, line 12: sea  see

References:

The references need to all be made consistent with ESD requirements in terms of page numbers, capitals and shortening of journal titles etc. The following reference was incomplete:

Kitsios, V., and J. Frederiksen, 2019: Subgrid parameterizations of the eddy-eddy,
eddy-meanfield, eddy-topographic, meanfield-meanfield and meanfield-topographic
interactions in atmospheric models. J. Atmos. Sci. 76, 457-477, (2019). doi:10.1175/JAS-D-18-0255.1

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RR by Anonymous Referee #2 (11 Jun 2019)

ED: Publish subject to minor revisions (review by editor) (19 Jun 2019) by Andrey Gritsun

AR by Davide Faranda on behalf of the Authors (28 Jun 2019) Author's response Manuscript

ED: Publish as is (15 Jul 2019) by Andrey Gritsun

Post-review adjustments

AA: Author's adjustment | EA: Editor approval

AA by Davide Faranda on behalf of the Authors (27 Aug 2019) Author's adjustment Manuscript

EA: Adjustments approved (28 Aug 2019) by Andrey Gritsun

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