Articles | Volume 15, issue 4
https://doi.org/10.5194/esd-15-929-2024
© Author(s) 2024. This work is distributed under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.
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ESD Ideas: Exoplanet, origins of life and biosphere researchers offer a perspective fundamental to ensuring humanity's future
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- Final revised paper (published on 25 Jul 2024)
- Preprint (discussion started on 08 Mar 2023)
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-299', Caleb Scharf, 24 Apr 2023
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ED: Reconsider after major revisions (06 Aug 2023) by James Dyke
AR by Raphaelle Haywood on behalf of the Authors (18 Aug 2023)
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ED: Reconsider after major revisions (29 Aug 2023) by James Dyke
ED: Referee Nomination & Report Request started (31 Aug 2023) by James Dyke
RR by Carsten Herrmann-Pillath (08 Sep 2023)
ED: Reconsider after major revisions (08 Jan 2024) by James Dyke
AR by Raphaelle Haywood on behalf of the Authors (01 May 2024)
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ED: Publish subject to minor revisions (review by editor) (10 May 2024) by James Dyke
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ED: Publish as is (30 May 2024) by James Dyke
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General comments:
This preprint is a short opinion and/or commentary on the relevance of the Earth Sciences, as well as evolutionary and astrobiological sciences, for driving a perspective that is described as critical for guiding human decisions that will determine our future longevity and the future of the Earth’s systems. It is a call for colleagues to harness this perspective and to connect their research to broader existential problems. In this sense it is not a research contribution per se.
While it offers a commendable ‘call-to-arms’ it presents a very limited argument in support of its primary contention that there is an entrenched conception of humans as distinct from Nature which hinders our most impactful decisions. It is mostly a collection of several talking points (life’s singular common ancestry, a Gaian planetary system, exoplanets and climates and life elsewhere) that are suggested as enabling a ‘compass’ for policy decisions and a narrative for guidance in global socio-economic issues.
The main weakness is that while all of this makes sense, it is not a new vision, and little specific evidence is presented to show how scientific knowledge about (for example) Earth’s deep history or the history of other worlds has tangible impact on seeing future directions for humanity. Are there examples where, for instance, predictive climate models have been significantly upgraded with such knowledge? How does the common ancestry of life on Earth inform us about biosphere function? What exactly might future exoplanet data tell us about choices for planetary environmental stability? A little more specificity throughout could help tighten the argument.
Specific comments:
Line 9-10: “An entrenched…”: This is an important statement, but the article does not provide that counterpoint perspective (humans distinct from Nature) so that the reader is left to infer that the various statements about life's history and evolution and planetary processes negate that perspective. i.e. a problem is indicated but then not explicitly stated in the body of the article.
16-17: “…partly because…”: This may be true but as stated is ambiguous: is it referring to improved knowledge about planet formation or alternate climate states, or something else? It is a statement that 'feels right' but without an elaboration on the basis is rather superficial.
19-20: “possessed the fundamental”: This is a hypothesis or definition rather than a proven fact, so perhaps soften this statement - if a LUCA existed, as seems plausible, then it would have possessed...etc.
21: “harbored the potential”: What does this mean? As written it suggests a pre-instantiated potential or pattern, whereas most research would suggest that the systems of the first 'life' had the capacity to lead to the emergence or generation of further novelty.
32-33: “If we want to ensure…”: It's a plausible sounding statement - but it's also a bit empty of evidence, it is a hypothesis that seems reasonable but what exactly is it about this acknowledgement that would lead to a sustainable future? Can some hint of that or specific examples be given?
42: “the products”: This is perhaps rather oversimplifying things, or at least missing the aspect of evolution that is perfectly fine erasing and reinventing functional forms and mechanisms. All species alive today exist as a snapshot within a long and constantly shifting landscape of evolution - should be careful not to suggest that everything today is somehow a special or 'ultimate' outcome.
45-46: “Humans would not survive…”: Perhaps it is important to make this statement, but it reads as so self-evident as to not be profound at all.
51: “identify constituent gases”: Clarify that these constituent gases may serve as remotely detectable biosignatures.
56-57: “test and validate…”: This is partially correct: we can use these observations to test the validity of these models in conditions that deviate from those of the modern Earth - checking whether the models capture climate processes in more 'extreme' or varied conditions than represented here.
62: “can guide policy decisions…”: The optimism is appreciated but is there a way to state this that is a little more nuanced - "could and should" rather than "can"?
Technical corrections:
Line 20: “primary tool” – suggest “primary strategy”
22-23: “chemistry into a durable biology”-à suggest “transformed one chemical system into another that we associate with biology”
32: “our instincts” – is this the right facility? Senses? Perceptions?
36: “The result is homeostasis:” à Perhaps more accurate to say something like "robust homeostasis" since homeostasis could exist in the absence of life (e.g. carbon-silicate cycle can form in an abiotic form).
43-44: “…we are a part of the planet…”: Sentence seems repetitive from previous statements.
58: typo around exoplanets